The Battle Between Brothers - Page19

February 26th, 2012, 2:31 pm

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Loverofpiggies, February 25th, 2012, 10:45 am     Reply

Maybe not a rainbow limo, but rainbow tires are just as classy!

And uh oh~!

Enjoy!

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contradiction123, February 26th, 2012, 2:33 pm     Reply

dat face

THOSE TIRES R TEH WINS

SEXBOMB, February 26th, 2012, 2:39 pm     Reply
so

so cute >:0

ChainleeZ, February 26th, 2012, 2:41 pm     Reply

Ohhh snap! yes!

Bludwulf, February 26th, 2012, 2:45 pm     Reply

HECK TO THE YUS!!!! <3 <3 XD Love Harolds face in the last pannel X3 Squeee

Luv from the goth girl, <3 Bludwulf <3

BootyBounce (Guest), February 26th, 2012, 2:47 pm     Reply

I demand you make a copy of this page with the boy version of Assisstant!

..ya'know...for the lulz...nshit..

-sits in corner-

RyoSoulreaper, February 26th, 2012, 2:51 pm     Reply

Let the Ship wars commence.

Raine-chan, February 26th, 2012, 2:56 pm     Reply

Aww XD; I hope he doesn't freak out.

szarosen, February 26th, 2012, 2:57 pm     Reply

SO CUTE D:

kemoiunder, February 26th, 2012, 3:00 pm     Reply

His eyes are like,"Wtf."

crunchyblueberry, February 26th, 2012, 3:02 pm     Reply

Yes, Harold, ENJOY the ride~ <3

StupidGenious, February 26th, 2012, 3:05 pm     Reply

This is gonna be a heck of a ride for Harold, isn't it?

Inxerene, February 26th, 2012, 3:08 pm     Reply

Eep! *w* I support this.

queensilian, February 26th, 2012, 3:14 pm     Reply

Those faces are just great

ghostlyhammer78, February 26th, 2012, 3:45 pm     Reply

I agree with BootyBounce! Make it with the guy-assistant! I will be your fan forevah!

remington, February 26th, 2012, 3:51 pm     Reply

This page reads even better if you read Wallis as drunk. Slurring his words, funny faces, he's got it all!

Love the rainbow tires, love Gloomverse.

ichigotakatsuki, February 26th, 2012, 3:51 pm     Reply

I've been waiting for this <333

lovelynobody00, February 26th, 2012, 3:54 pm     Reply

And so the shippage begins <3

DeRaps, February 26th, 2012, 4:21 pm     Reply

Oh god.
Author, I shall marry you for those two panels.
AssistantxHarold >:3

Guest, November 28th, 2017, 4:38 pm     Reply

That’s My biggest OTP right now XD

lilmissbunnybitch, February 26th, 2012, 4:29 pm     Reply

Panel 2 ish cute >.<

BattleStarX, February 26th, 2012, 4:31 pm     Reply

Yay for rainbow tires!


And Wallis, must you be so deliciously evil?

Seven Rain, February 26th, 2012, 5:06 pm     Reply

Me gusta.

Not only at that little FemAssist/Harold moment but at Wallis' reaction.

ShanaFlareon, February 26th, 2012, 5:16 pm     Reply

i can see the ships already

Frappecinno, February 26th, 2012, 5:30 pm     Reply

*GASM!*
She's so much better as a girl!!!!

Complete Stranger, February 26th, 2012, 5:41 pm     Reply

WALLACE'S FACE.

That is all.

Megane-Chan, February 26th, 2012, 5:59 pm     Reply

I SHIP IT SO HAAAARD

TheSerialPanda, February 26th, 2012, 6:36 pm     Reply

I GIGGLED AT THE LAST PANEL~~~~~
ASDF I WILL NOW SHIP THEM. SHIP THEM FOREVER~!!!
FEMSISTANT~!! WHY MUST YOU BE SO INNOCENT.

ToxicBreeze, February 26th, 2012, 6:37 pm     Reply

...LOL amg that's so cute and funny i can't even X'DD

Mikashi, February 26th, 2012, 6:38 pm     Reply

OMG.
The last two panels are priceless. <333.

Maiumaora, February 26th, 2012, 8:32 pm     Reply

Rainbow tires?

Now that's gangsta.

Xenocide, February 26th, 2012, 10:21 pm     Reply

BUT-BUT-BUT

FEMSISTANT X WALLIS ;_;

ohfineitsstilladorablebutilikefemsistantxwallisbetter >>

Mokenda, February 26th, 2012, 11:07 pm     Reply

Definitely the better one to be unconsiously leaning on :I
Wallis would probably take it as a horrible offense and give her a pig nose.

SpiralPen, February 27th, 2012, 12:19 am     Reply

I think I've only commented once, I need to change that :C
Well, last time I left a truckload of feedback and this time I only have a small bit. It's not very relevant or anything and it's more of a personal opinion, but I like to get feedback, so... I hope you like it, too? XD
I love the comic and like I said, I much prefer this post Genderbender version to the original! However, I've found myself a tab bit more removed from the dialogue. It feels a little like any character can/would say anything the others would, too. More like a broad script penned by one person than a bunch of individual voices. I dunno if that's just me, or not, but I figured I may as well drop an honest opinion.
That small gripe aside, the writing itself is still very witty and enjoyable!

Loverofpiggies, February 27th, 2012, 8:45 am     Reply

I don't really get what you mean. All the characters would say what they would, just like in the other comic.

For instance, in this page Wallis is obviously messing with Harold in a way Harold simply wouldn't act towards Wallis. And I doubt Assistant would pick on either of them. Wallis is always very cocky in the way he speaks, while Harold and Assistant are not. Assistant also acts awkward beyond belief, which Harold doesn't, and certainly Wallis doesn't.

I respectfully disagree with your statement on that, they all act in the way their own character would. If you're comparing how they act now with how they've acted in the old version (just going on an assumption), well thats just an unfair comparison, considering the two are so vastly different, and the dialogue in the last version was painfully forced.

I mean this in the kindest way possible, of course. Even though I disagree, I'll take what you say into account, and I'll recheck over my work and see for myself. :>

kitaxhaku, February 27th, 2012, 10:26 am     Reply
Okay okay okay

So I have been trying to keep this cray cray inner fan girl inside...but this page...THIS PAGE. THE ASSISTANT IS TOO GOD DAMN CUTE. GAHHHHHHHH LET THE PAIRING COMMENCE!

Mao, February 27th, 2012, 10:58 am     Reply

Ride in style with rainbow tires.

ShoeLaces, February 27th, 2012, 12:16 pm     Reply

No. No, I will not be converted. I will always ship WallisxAssistant. There's no way I will join in this HaroldxAssistant crap and that will not chan-
AHMAHGAAAAW HIS FACE DID YOU SEE HIS FACE OH MY GOSH IT'S TOO ADORABLE MY GOD THAT IS SO KYOOOOOT AND WHY AM I ENJOYING THIS SO MUCH? ;A;

(But it's gonna take more than that to convert me. >:D)

Jaculynn (Guest), February 27th, 2012, 12:37 pm     Reply
So much better. :>

I'm happy for the GenderBend on this. And especially for this scene. God, Assistant x Harold. Too Cute. If it had been the other way it wouldn't have had the same feeling. It would have been just meh dude's tired and accidentally fell asleep on my shoulder shove. With a girl it's like; "Oh shit...what do I do!? What do I do!?" Hehe Much love on this buddy! <3

SpiralPen, February 27th, 2012, 3:13 pm     Reply

@Loverofpiggies:
You're absolutely right! I WAS comparing them to the old version! Alright, now that you helped me catch myself, I'll read it without those subjective goggles :P

mananabiscuit, February 27th, 2012, 4:49 pm     Reply

@ShanaFlareon: Captain, our ship is ready. We have at least one smart cannonball to defend her integrity while our enemies still eye the waters hungrily.
Captain: Aye, then we sail!
...who will be the captain though haha

mananabiscuit, February 27th, 2012, 4:52 pm     Reply

Aw I just realized how cute the first bump-panel was D'x Oooh so cuuute hahahha aaaaw <3333

*Suki*, February 27th, 2012, 5:17 pm     Reply

AWWWWWWWWW ;U;

artistincompre (Guest), February 27th, 2012, 7:26 pm     Reply
omgOMG

YESSSSSSSSSSS MY SHIP IS SAILING <D

Loverofpiggies, February 28th, 2012, 9:37 am     Reply

@SpiralPen: haha its no problem. Truth is, I've brought this up in a journal before, is even though they both have the same characters, everything is so incredibly different and they aren't necessarily being written as the same genre anymore either. (Still comedy but with a lot more development and plot involved). I could write them the old way if I could, but I felt a lot more subtlety was necessary. Especially since in the old version I feel as if I sacrificed the characters I wanted to portray, for gag-a-day pages. Give em time, I bet you'll like what I got in store!

Loverofpiggies, February 28th, 2012, 9:37 am     Reply

Also I should have known this would be the reaction to this page, haha.

Dranx, February 28th, 2012, 2:06 pm     Reply

I can't believe she's sleeping through all that bickerin- oh wait, yes I can, I do it all the time when there's a thunderstorm outside...I hate that. But this is just too cute. Thank goodness I like both GloomxFem!Assistant and HaroldxFem!Assistant. Win win, yes?
.....
Maybe a love triangle? *drolls slightly*

Snoweh, February 28th, 2012, 9:26 pm     Reply

THE SHIPS ARE COMING! THE SHIPS ARE COMING!!

Lolligag (Guest), February 29th, 2012, 11:23 pm     Reply

Brace yourself, the shippers are coming.

RoseKoi, March 1st, 2012, 12:58 am     Reply

How charming. <3

cookiemonster69 (Guest), March 1st, 2012, 9:48 pm     Reply
heheh

THIS IS ADORABLE!!!

animefan23, March 3rd, 2012, 9:51 pm     Reply

I made the same face Wallis did when I read this page.

AND I REALLY HAVE TRIED TO NOT LET MY "SHIPS EVERYONE" SIDE COME OUT DURING THIS COMIC BUT THIS PAGE JUST KILLED THAT. OTL

FEMASSISTANTXHAROLD FOREVER!!!!!!!

CrippleCakes, March 3rd, 2012, 10:57 pm     Reply

@Frappecinno:
Agreed 100%

Twinkel13, March 9th, 2012, 11:59 am     Reply
last panel

Harold's face OMG XD

Brynwyth, September 17th, 2016, 2:49 pm     Reply

:D

Mysh (Guest), March 19th, 2017, 12:01 am     Reply
"Ossifer"

That reminds me of something my brother said when we were doing history; "Thomas Jesserfun." I always loved that version of the dude's name so much better than his actual last name XD

Melody The Silver Angel, March 27th, 2017, 4:04 pm     Reply

Harolitant and Walitant anyone?

Iliekships (Guest), September 3rd, 2017, 11:40 pm     Reply

Wallis's face tho... iz PRICELESS

LollipopStudios, September 21st, 2017, 10:31 pm     Reply

And thus, an OTP was born.

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