Bowties Stars and Candy - Page 7

July 18th, 2012, 1:41 pm

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Loverofpiggies, July 18th, 2012, 1:41 pm     Reply

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pleasingMOFO, July 18th, 2012, 1:49 pm     Reply

@Daveanthony: it is the Umineko emblem because Assistant IS the REAL Beatrice! Muhahaha

pokesam, July 18th, 2012, 1:50 pm     Reply

Nah, Assistant, your magic might probably be something a bit darker than that.

Raine-chan, July 18th, 2012, 1:54 pm     Reply

Aww~

Author Jakes, July 18th, 2012, 2:03 pm     Reply

Damn. That's some deep imagery.

Complete Stranger, July 18th, 2012, 3:05 pm     Reply

I like that hat, but I don't think it'll be the one she picks...

Yoi, July 18th, 2012, 3:29 pm     Reply

That hat does look good on her.
Ahh day dreaming~ xD

AngelicLily, July 18th, 2012, 4:10 pm     Reply

O_O That last panel is beautiful.

Seven Rain, July 18th, 2012, 4:34 pm     Reply

Poor Assistant. The second you dreamt of having fun magic you sealed your fate as having the most terrible/impractical magic imaginable.

EstevaoPB, July 18th, 2012, 7:37 pm     Reply
Critique

Allow me some criticism? Surelly your new way of taking the characters is improving. But, i liked the previous style more; it was so fluid and and funny while progressing steadly with the story... Now i think all the characters kind of grew up out of nothing, and pages with tons of speech (and almost no jokes) become abundant. It´s like the story itself is abruptly cut, from a funny/lovely history to a fanservice-driven scheme.
That´s my opnion tough. I´ll be glad to hear opnion of others too ;)

Loverofpiggies, July 18th, 2012, 8:47 pm     Reply

@EstevaoPB: I will say, I welcome critiques on my comics, and have no problem with that! Though I will answer some things.

For one, I will say that I will not revert styles. This updated style gives me better usage of anatomy skills so that I may actually improve my art, so I'm sorry that won't be changing.

I am confused what you mean on "The characters grew out of nothing", and honestly, there is plot-related stuff that must be taken care of before I can continue with the comic. The characters thoughts and emotions on subjects, along with rules about how magic and the actual world works, are important to convey before I continue further. Perhaps I may have been going a bit too quickly, and that is the issue? Nevertheless these must be covered. That being said, I will try to slow things down a little bit.

The only part I outright absolutely disagree with is the "Fanservice-driven scheme". How exactly is Gloomverse coming across as fanservice?

eaglelily, July 18th, 2012, 9:36 pm     Reply

I love how the rainbow dreads are in her happy thoughts. xD They don't even phase her anymore LMAO

Potatoes4Eva, July 18th, 2012, 10:57 pm     Reply

DAT HAT.
DAT LAST PANEL.
DAT ASSISTANT.

TheProjectCore, July 19th, 2012, 1:55 am     Reply

Nice clothes Assistant!

Whos name i still dont know

HaKu10, July 19th, 2012, 3:33 am     Reply

Finally caught up with story! Man, I missed it so much! XD

JimLad, July 19th, 2012, 5:02 am     Reply

If she keeps posing like that in short shorts I'm gonna have to take a man break. :P

EstevaoPB, July 19th, 2012, 6:40 am     Reply

@Loverofpiggies: Yeah, i could see that you changed the style of your works to make the story even better (and that´s awesome. It´s no use to get stuck on a stage of your work because someone liked it, thus making the same thing again and again), it´s a matter of time for you to get the best of this new style.

The "characters grew up" thing is just because of the change. ;)

About the progression of the story, i think that´s what happened. There was this sudden change of pace; We´ll be always here reading, you can take your time =D

And i think that´s why i tought it was fan-service; so many emotions exposed so quickly...

And that´s one hell long comment, thanks for reading ;)

Sabbo Again, July 19th, 2012, 8:02 am     Reply

@TheProjectCore: You typed her name in your comment, though.

Loverofpiggies, July 19th, 2012, 10:11 am     Reply

@EstevaoPB: Hmm good points! Alright, maybe I was moving too fast. Don't worry, I'll try to fix that little issue. And yeah, when someone has a complaint (or a critique) I feel its important to discuss it with them and get a better understanding. Sometimes as the artist, you aren't fully aware of how the comic is being percieved by others, I usually end up being more focused on plot/character development, ect. ect. So its good to know. And I will say thank you for explaining the fanservice thing. I've never been a fan of fanservice (lul) and don't include it in my comics. Unless its Seaweed, in which thats more of a girl who has no shame type thing. And of course! I read all comments, I just usually don't have time to reply to them all. Speaking of...

@Daveanthony: Oh god, that was unintentional! hahaha. Though I think I may have been one of the few that genuinely didn't like that anime.

@pleasingMOFO: The truth is revealed!!

@pokesam: I wonder if thats true! Darn, if only I knew what her magic was going to be! That artist is one sneaky fellow.

@Raine-chan: :)

@Arthor Jakes: Oh yeah, I know! So deep man.

@Complete Stranger: Who knows! I think its spiffy. If only I knew the outcome. D:

@Yoi: I daydream silly stuff all the time myself.

@AngelicLily: Aww thank you! I wanted to make it beautiful. <3

@Seven Rain: Could you imagine jumping around and accidentally slamming into things all the time? She needs to think things through! :D

@geegs: Best anime idea EVER. Gloomcaptors!

@eaglelily: hahaha yeah I guess she's finally gotten used to them! I'm sure she misses her real hair somewhere in there!

@Potatoes4Eva: DAT COMMENT <3

@TheProjectCore: But Assistant is her name! D:>

@HaKu10: Welcome to the final updated page! And aww, thank you! I'm guessing you just lost track of GV?

@JimLad: Oh... oh god D:

GrovyleGoodbye128, July 19th, 2012, 12:47 pm     Reply

You guys are crazy!
Also, i like the way this is. I wish she had magic, the poor dear. :(

AuraX (Guest), July 19th, 2012, 2:20 pm     Reply

Her fantasy includes her new hair?

Guess she's starting to like it :3

EstevaoPB, July 19th, 2012, 6:29 pm     Reply

@Loverofpiggies: Nice! Good that i could pass on my feelings ;) By the way, soon i´ll be doing a comic as well, hope you can drop by eventually and give some first impressions ;)

KireiStar, July 20th, 2012, 1:02 pm     Reply

um.. not to be a pain, I really love this page, but I noticed that on the second panel, Wallis's poster was on the right of the hat shelf, but on the last panel, the poster is to the right of the hat shelf, but the same hats from before are also on this new shelf, if that makes sense.

vapidity, July 22nd, 2012, 8:46 am     Reply

I read your comic a while ago when assistant was still a boy, and now I just read the entire archive and goodness! I actually love it a lot more. Wallis actually has a heart! And the characters overall seem to be more enduring. Can't wait for the next updates, I know I'll be reading this frequently. C=

Loverofpiggies, July 23rd, 2012, 5:37 pm     Reply

@GrovyleGoodbye128: Yeah I know. >: Being unmagical in a magical world is a sad thing!

@AuraX (Guest): I'd think so! Or just become accustomed to it. :0

@Daveanthony: Lul, makes more sense then all the weird explanations Battler uses!

@EstevaoPB: Sure, I won't mind! As long as you're looking for a real critique and no pandering. Though I promise I'm not harsh in any way! I just call em as I see em!

@KireiStar: You're not a pain, don't worry about it. :> I fixed the issue, thanks for bringing it up!

@vapidity: Oh wow, thank you very much! Yeah, thats why I did the remake in the first place. The first version felt like it had so much more potential and I hated where my characters went. ;_; specially Wallis. Thanks so much for coming back, I'm happy you like the reboot!

EstevaoPB, July 27th, 2012, 11:23 pm     Reply

@Loverofpiggies: Sure thing! I´ll make you know when it´s rolling ;)

kolda, August 5th, 2012, 11:43 pm     Reply

Ahh, this page's really pretty.

Youneversawme (Guest), July 12th, 2016, 11:42 am     Reply

Oh I see what you did there, tricky tricky...

Isa Dreemurr (Guest), October 26th, 2016, 9:03 pm     Reply
Hats in the background

Hmm, okay, let's see here, I see a Flash hat, Rarity from MLP, Pinkie Pie from MLP, Twilight Sparkle from MLP,- basically a lot of MLP D:

Guest/OnTheNoseName (Guest), April 25th, 2017, 6:30 pm     Reply

That's not a bad look for her :D

Artikah, May 26th, 2017, 9:25 am     Reply

Rereading this and jUST REALIZED THAT THE LADT PANEL WAS FORESHADOWING AHAHAHA

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